4.01.2011

NaPoWriMo 2011 #1: Rush Hour

Rush Hour
On the way to the carI look in through the window
Everybody else hangs their heads by
You look like a friend of mine
But pretty enough to be working
Behind the strip club's front desk
You text something on your phone and
I can't help but want to see you naked,
Your boredom is so becoming
So I stare a little longer, but
My lingering reflection tells meI should probably just call my friend.

2 comments:

  1. fabulous sentiments.
    love the spirits in it.
    masterful delivery.

    :)

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